The "Boom Boom Brannigan" story had an interesting plot, despite being unbelievable that Fish could pull off his scheme. The artwork was good. Yes, it has somewhat of a "poor man's Will Eisner look. The ending with the crooks' boxer having been made into a dancing star by the effeminate choreographer was unexpected. Clearly, the story was meant to be a light-hearted comedy all the way.
Frankenstein was a silly, but somewhat entertaining story. The artwork wasn't terrible, but was fairly sparse.
The Howie Post Little Indian "story" was decently drawn. It was typical animation-style physical gag-driven. Not funny in the slightest.
The Prince Ra story was somewhat interesting. But, it didn't make much sense. Why is an ancient immortal Egyptian living in USA and fighting with The US Army Air Corps versus The Germans in WWII? And you know very well that The US Army is NOT going to allow pilots to use their own, non regulation planes! I guess The Prince's was serviced by ancient magic. I, too, thought the attempt at putting Germans speaking English with a "German accent" was a terrible failure. That's NOT how Germans sound trying to speak English. I guess the writer had never heard a German speak English or German. Better to write a very simple German sentence in German language in the first German's balloon (one which even an American kid can understand its gist) add an asterisk to it; and then, define it at the bottom of the page as follows: "German characters' speech translated to English for the benefit of the reader."
I really wanted to find out Prince Ra's relationship to USA, and something about his back story. How and why did he become immortal? Is he a celebrity in USA? - Or is he only known in The Army? They accepted this quirky guy who has a "bird-plane" because he's one helluva(n) air ace, and the outcome of the war is still in doubt.
Maybe there's no back information about Prince Ra because he's had his own series in "Prize Comics"? Or, he's, at least, a recurring character?
In any case, this kind of "tossed-in-setup" would NEVER fly with my editors. We have to write stories as if every reader is a new reader, and has never read a story with our characters before. So, if we introduce a new character, we have to weave in information about his past the connects to our story, fairly early in the story, OR in special cases, the IFC would have to be used as an "information page" for introducing the new character.
But, maybe Prize was using this as a "teaser", to test market the possibility of starting a series of Prince Ra having a regular monthly story in Prize Comics, based on readers letters to the editor asking for The Prince's "origin story"? Can anyone tell me if this character had already been used a lot before this issue?
Yank & Doodle (Starring The Black Owl) was lousy! I've never liked Batman and Robin-style teams, anyway. This guy has 2 Robins tagging along with him. And NONE of them are introduced. We never know who, or what "The Black Owl" is! This story makes little sense. Why would a small village doctor and his daughter believe a salesman with many thousands of dollars worth of top-line jewelry would be driving through the countryside alone. with the jewelry loose, inside a briefcase, rather than encased in display cases, and the case having a foolproof lock system. They could have only have opened it if he had left it unlocked, or if the key had been attached (which is unsafe). Clearly, he is NOT a jewelry salesman. They should have been suspicious that he might be a burglar or a fence. While he was unconscious, they should have looked through his pockets for his wallet and ID, and then notified the police, in case there had been a jewelry store burglary or robbery recently. The continuous bumps to the gang leader's head, changing him back and forth from crook to honest amnesiac is way too hard to believe. As an ex-hockey player, who has had a severe concussion with recurring symptoms, I find the events in this story too unbelievable. Maybe I'd believe ONE reversal, but, with more time between. And then having the young woman want to stick with the "honest amnesiac" version of him after knowing his real identity as a hardened criminal, and having only known him for parts of two days, is way too much to believe.
I'd have been fired if I turned in a story like this. And, the story wouldn't have been accepted. As I would be getting tossed out the publishing office door, the story editor would come running out waving a 5 Euro bill saying, "I'll give you 5 Euros for your story, - so we can use it for an example of 'how NOT to write a story'! It has examples of just about ALL the mistakes a comic book story writer can make!"