At my age, I tend to need an editor, I usually preview my posts but, when in a hurry, sometimes, to my embarrassment, I miss an error.
I meant to write, So, it jars on [should have been 'in'] this version.
that is,
'so, it jars in this version' This meaning intended:-
4. verb
If something jars on you, you find it unpleasant, disturbing, or shocking.
Sometimes a light remark jarred on her father. [VERB + on]
...televised congressional hearings that jarred the nation's faith in the presidency. [VERB noun]
You shouldn't have too many colours in a small space as the effect can jar. [VERB]
jarring adjective
In the context of this chapter, Dore's comments strike a jarring note.
And, no I not a Scot, although I have Scots in my ancestry.
In any case, I would have thought the context made the point obvious.
To put it in other words, 'It stood out that the comment about world war 3 would have been unlikely in the original text.'
So does that mean that the sentence "I came across a plot to start a 'third world war' in 10 days." rattles the reader's attention, because it seems out of context?
Exactly!
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