Exciting Comics 2 - Version 1Ted Crane and The Leopard Men - drawn by L. NorthI am disappointed in L. North's artwork. His faces are not drawn very well (stiff, lacking expression, and detail; and his figures are also very stiff, an don't display motion very well. I'm surprised to see 4-tiers in a 1940 Ned Pines-published book. It seems to me that every one I've seen up to now has had 3 tiers.
However, the story plot provides some hope for a worthwhile reading experience. Villain's henchmen dressing up in leopard skins to have a power seeker's bidding done, using legendary superstitious fear among the people, makes for an interesting story plot. And having the henchmen wearing them breath out dangerous knock-out chemicals adds yet another interesting highlight. I always cringe at the lack of geographical and historical knowledge of the early comic-book writers. Rubber plantations in Africa were all in the wettest rainforest areas on the Atlantic coast and south-facing coast of West Africa (Guinea Coast/Ivory Coast/Gold Coast), rather than in the two tiny riverene belts of not-as-wet rainforest on the southern Indian ocean coast of Kenya and northern Tanganiyka nearest to Mombassa.
Ha! Ha! The ex college athlete uses a North American Football-style kick to send a deadly snake flying out of danger to them!
. Of course a "Lost" tribe of natives, deep inside The African Rainforest is always an interesting plot device. It seems as if Ted's party should have arleadyreached a point where horses became impractical near the beginning of the forest, not after hours of travelling inside it before reaching a clearing. Of course, Ted fights the ambushing natives alone, (one against 8-10! Ted discerns that a large metallic idol statue is made of 100% solid gold, fro, perhaps, 50 paces away. He must have Superman's X-Ray vision!. The narrative describes a well-sized cargo ship as a "yacht". At the end of Ted and Mombassa's local police's battle with The Leopard Men on the gigantic "yacht", thei latter's leader is unmasked, and turns out to be the rubber plantation owner, who kidnaps Konogo (lost rainforest tribe)'s men to use as slaves on his island plantation. And, of course, in dramatic fashion, Ted and the released Konogo ex-captives, reach their village just in time to save The Professor's life, with the herbal antidote for the deadly knockout drug the villains used on him. I think it is amazing (unusual, to say the least) that this "lost" tribe was only recently hiding themselves from the evil plantation owner's kidnapping "Leopard Men", to avoid being captured to become slaves. They certainly have a good grabber for the reader to want to purchase the following issue, by having the Konogo chieftain offer to lead Ted and his party to "The City of Gold".
The Space RoversIt is amazing to me that the writer of this story would believe that readers wouldn't mind the ridiculousness of a private non-wealthy scientist would be able to develop a space ship capable of inter-planetary travel, while not working for the government of a major World economic power, and before any such national government or international entity could do so. I like the idea of foreign spies wanting to steal it for their government or evilly-run illegal international criminal organisation. But that problem could have been avoided by having The Professor working for The US military or government "Space Agency". This setting seems to imply that the Professor is a hobbyist, taking a great gamble, and finding a high-rolling financier, sinking all his resources into a such risky venture.
And after seemingly, not even a single day and night, their ship is nearing The Sun, 94 MILLION miles from where they started. I guess the hobbyist professor invented a pretty good way to keep constant pressure in the cabin, given that the passengers don't even need to wear pressurized space suits to help withstand the astronomical G-force that would result from moving at that impossibly high rate of speed! And, to add insult to injury, our Heroes land on the impossibly hot surface of daytime Mercury, reaches 800 degrees F! And, lo and behold! It has forests growing on it, and a river!!! And as in almost all comics about Space, before the late 1950s, the Humans wear no space helmets provided with oxygen on an alien planet, assuming that the atmosphere on other planets is EXACTLY the same as Earth's.
Even if I had read this in The Late 1940s, I'd have known that Mercury, with The Sun shining on it, would be way too hot for Humans, who would be completely desicated, and burnt to a crisp in seconds, and whose atmosphere (IF it had one, at all) would be deadly toxic to most, if not all Earth life (certainly to Humans and all life more complicated than single celled). They soon come across Mercurian "Cavemen"! And the "civilised Mercurians live only 20 years and plan to dissect Ted and The Professor's daughter, to see why they live so much longer. The alien dissector uses an electric knife. ted spills water, which conveniently drains towards the former, and that tiny trickle of water electricutes him, before he can cut her. That is very difficult for me to believe. From the inside of his cage (conveniently on wheels), Ted pushes the wall towards the operating table, and ends up next to it. He unstraps the woman (conveniently not very securely strapped). An ridiculous amount of situations had to be set up for them to escape and get back to their spaceship. NONE of the editors with whom I've worked would have accepted this script, and I'd never have been able to submit a script to any of their publishers ever again.
Son Of The Gods7An archaeologist (seemingly of Greek heritage) looking for a valuable relic from the legendary period of Bronze Age Mycenean Greece! As a history buff, I like that plot introduction. After killing a boar in the woods, and killing a villain's henchman, sent to kill him, to keep him from excavating King Minos' labyrinth of The Minotar, this story's hero, Thesson, finds the Immortal Ring of Poseidon; and so, local Greeks pay homage honouring him as a kind of "Savior of The World (the re-incarnation of the ancient hero, Theseus. He accepts his calling as the reincarnation of the ancient Greek Hero (half immortal and half normal Human). And he makes a pledge to fight against those who commit evil deeds. We witness a new Superhero being born, just in time to read about his adventures as a Superhero in next months issue of "Exciting Comics". I wish Ned Pines were still alive, so i could thank him for this wonderful opportunity (but also chastise him for abruptly ending his Canadian "Merry-Go-Round" comic book series in 1948 after only two issues!
Dan Williams - Private InvestigatorThis private dick sees some blood on the floor, and is already convinced there has been a murder. H never read "Sherlock Holmes", who saves his definite conclusions for after seeing the final clue that proves what actually happened? What a considerate and generous Private Eye! He risks going to jail, and, at least, losing his detective license, by interfering with a police case, by assaulting the police officer guarding their chief suspect, and stealing her away from the crime scene, and hiding her from them. The story ends with Williams, with the help of The Marine Police (Coast Guard unit or Harbour Police), following the gang of counterfeiters, led by the falsely-accused woman's cousin (who had tried to frame her for the two murders) to their island hideout, revealing their counterfeiting operation, rescuing the accused woman, and defeating the gang.
This is very nostalgic story for me, as it reminds me of a Donald Duck story from the 1950s, in which, as an amateur detective, he and his nephews discover the island hideout of a gang of counterfeiters, seeing a printing press and thousands of paper bills lying all over the floor. There are no murders in Disney, butthe story is similar enough, including the kidnapping with the counterfeiting gang's island hideout. I had originally also erroneously "remembered" The Beagle Boys kidnapping Donald's inventor friend, Gyro Gearloose, and taking him to their island hideout, and forcing him to invent a printing process which would make counterfeit bills completely indistinguishable from the legal tender versions, but that part must be from another Donald/Gyro/Beagle Boys story, from the 1960s, which is much more cloudy in my memory.
Sergeant Bill KingI have to say that I don't really like the artwork by ANY of the artists in this book. NONE of them draw people's faces well, nor do they draw figures well. And the backgrounds are much too sparse for my taste, and not at all realistic-looking. Interesting that a US comic book in 1940, before they joined the war, wanted a soldier hero, so they chose to use a British soldier on the lines in the "Phoney War" between The British and Germans in Belgium, imagining it being similar in action and tactics to what happened there during WWI, because nothing different had happened on The Western Front, because The German army was busy administering the recent gains in conquered Poland, and was not yet ready for a serious effort in The West. If the US comics publishers and writers wanted a US soldier hero before they officially entered the war, they could have told the story of a Yank volunteer fighter pilot in The UK's RAF.
This story is very matter-of-fact, and bloody boring. The Sergeant rushes across the German's line, kills a few Gerries, and can't go back to his side because of a barrage of machine gun bullets heading his way from friendly fire. So, he keeps moving forward until he can blow up a German pill box, and then enter their trench unmolested. There he finds his own troop's captain, who he rescues and brings back to his own trench, again. Later, he is decorated as a hero for his bravery and the rescue, and taking out most of an enemy troop, single-handed.
The Grey Rider - Text StoryThe one tiny drawing for this text story looks 100 times better to me than the art by ANY of this book's other stories. And this 1-page text story makes the most sense, out of all this book's stories (although it is very mundane and not very interesting.
The Mystery of The Lost MineAn interesting plot. I wonder how that tiny mask hid enough of the geologist's face to keep his identity hidden. Surely the tone in his voice, along with his body shape and mannerisms would have given him away to the ranch owner and his daughter from his previous dealings with them, EVEN if he tried to disguise his voice. The many narrative comments on what was happening are not necessary, as the pictures and dialogue show what is happening. That was a big no-no for writers and artists saccording to editors from the 1970s until now. So, this appears to have been a newspaper strip adapted to the comic book format. Can anyone here tell me if that is so? The pacing of the story seems to be too even, providing several dull gaps - (e.g. no increase in tension, buildup of suspense, nor racing towards the finish line of the climax and revealing of the mystery and revelation of its solution in a short epilogue. That fact also leads me to the conclusion that this was an adapted newspaper strip.
The Sphinx I'm not familiar at all with this character. Was he imbued with superpowers from the ancient Egyptian gods or Pharaohs? -, at least having some connection with ancient Egypt? It seems we have yet another Superhero who helps the police, like a combination of Sherlock Holmes and Superman. Ordinarily, THAT combination would make this character as popular as most of the big superheroes - popular enough, even for laypeople (even folks who were around in the 1940s and 1950s to be acquainted with him, -EVEN if they didn't read superhero comic books. At that time, almost EVERYONE read the Sunday newspaper comics section. So, I'm wondering why he was not more popular, and didn't last long, like Superman and Batman.
The Sphinx MUST have super powers, because it would be impossible to leap many feet in the air, and land sure-footed and stationary onto such a narrow auto's running board, with his feet flush to its surface, and keep his footing, with the vehicle moving so fast. I see, now that The Sphinx, at least, has super strength, as he punches a hole in a metal wall, to escape a locked room in a ship. However, the hole his punch left has sharp, jagged edges to it that would have ripped into the skin of his arm. So, we have to guess that his super strength also provides protection for his body's surface and probably structure, too (e.g. keeps his bones from breaking, and joints from being pulled apart). Again, as in the case of "The Mystery of The Lost Mine", the storytelling format has the narrative explaining exactly what the reader can clearly see in the panels' pictures. So, I'm guessing this story was also adapted from a newspaper strip.
I don't understand why the "launch" (small motorboat) engine explodes, just because a much bigger ship collides with it. I'd expect the smaller craft to be smashed to pieces, but not necessarily result in the smaller boat's engine exploding. THIS story has narratives describing what is happening over many, if not MOST of the panels. It's very irritating to the reader. It's so frequent that it makes The Western story seem palatable.And just at the heavy action of the story's climax, every single panel has a narrative at it's top, explaining EXACTLY what is shown in it's picture. That is incredibly bad form slowing down the action to almost a complete standstill. I can't imagine an editor allowing this, EVEN near the beginning of The Coimic Book Golden Age, when editorial policies were first forming. And why did the colourist paint the prototype tank blue and PINK???!!! It helped to deliberately ignore all the narratives on the story's last several pages, and just look at the illustrations and read the dialogue. Otherwise, the action cannot even be followed with all the narrative interruptions.
The Mask ReturnsBeing permanently, or even long-term disguised as a blind man is an interesting feature in the career of a superherolike mystery man. Again, we have narratives over EVERY panel, describing exactly what is in each one. I wondered how I missed that in this book's first few stories, and found that they, too use that format, except that they have, at least a few, scattered panels with narratives (the space story has quite a bit less, being almost acceptable). This story, with The Mask's crew infiltrating the villain gang, is a decent general story idea, but it's value is ruined by the narratives describing what the reader is seeing with his/her own eyes.
Book AssessmentOverall, I'm not impressed by Mr. Pines' editor, although most of the stories have decent ideas in the makeup of their heroes and plots (not so silly and objectionable to me as thge typical later Superhero genre stories and characters). The artwork, however, is mainly weak to my taste, and the colouring is wrong in spots (colour of characters' clothing or room walls and other background items changing from panel to panel). Not the most enjoyable of reads, but still less objectionable to me than the typical later Superhero genre stories.