Jet Power 2The Three Million Year Old MenI agree with Scrounges point that The Kroog are NOT 3 million years old while travelling in Jet Powers time. Having a birthdate 3 million years later, makes them the epitome of youth, at the grand young age of negative 3 million +!!!
. Man, I would like to have had 3 million years before getting old!
Very nasty of Dr. Walters to send two of his "friends" into the future without having tested his machine to see if it is easy to use in a reasonably safe manner. I used a similar plotline to that, myself, in my own, as yet, unpublished science fiction book series, featuring a bumbling, egotistical, university professor, archaeologist, who happens to be a robot, from about 30,000 years into our future. He lives on Planet Earth, whose Human population has all died off, and its only sentient beings are self-perpetuating, artificially intelligent Robots. He absolutely HATES the boring existence of these "people", who, because of their perfect mathematical logic, all think and act alike (except for himself and a few other "deviants" (who must require adjustments to their motherboards to fix their defects). Wanting to go back to his perceived "Golden Age" of Earth, when the sentient Robots were first starting to be integrated into Human society, he builds an especially large time machine, whose chamber appears to be a benign meeting hall hired for parties. Our bumbling protagonist kidnaps his wife, children parents, in-laws, and his few best friends and their immediate families, and sends himself, together with all of them, back to that "Golden Age", as he thought they would like that World better (just as he would).
Interesting that Su Shan, who used to be Jets prisoner, seems to be on friendly terms with him now. So, Jet finds Walters time machine, and uses it to search blindly over the millennia to try to find where in time The Kroog scouting party has gone. On the surface, that seems a totally worthless effort. After travelling to the time The Earth is dead because The Sun is losing its last bit of energy (a few billion years after Earth was burnt to a trip by The Suns expansion, and then to The Earths time of formation (ridiculously trying to imply that he has now covered every day of the Earths existence, Jet realises that he should not have wasted his time. But, Jet remembered that Walters had a remote control device for the time machine, and uses it to take The Kroog to a time where he can meet them. The author uses a giant thought balloon to have Jet thinking to himself about how he built his own time machine and used Walters remote control device to control Walters machine that was in The Kroogs possession. People don't think that way, so it is unnatural, and takes the reader out of "living in the story" I have always hated that tool that comic book authors use. Jet throws The Kroog time travellers out of their time machine and takes it to Space at a time before The Earth was formed (albeit so that they will never build it, because they wont find it when they find Walters, because Jet also has removed Walters machine, ostensibly after he built it, but before they first came upon it. But all that is not explained in a satisfactory and understandable manner in the storys text. Jet seals Walters original machine in one of Jets secret laboratories (so he can use it in the future). Of course the time-travelling Kroog are left to their seemingly horrible fate in Earths Cretaceous period. This story basic plotline could be changed to something really good IF it were given an entire book for Episode 1, and an entire series to relate the entire time travelling saga of "Jet Powers Time Traveller". As usual, a comic book Sci-Fi story has not only not enough space to develop a setting, the main characters, an adequate plot line, proper pacing, and even to get the right balance of narrative text, speech balloons, and what is pictured in panels. so the scope of the story must be chopped down to almost nothing, and there is no room to tell a coherent story (and no room to explain even the most important scientific aspects.
I had to deal with some of this plotlines issues regarding travelling into the past to keep bad-spirited or selfishly ignorant time travellers from ruining The Earths present in several different dimensions, by undoing events which had occurred in the past. All in all, this story, despite its ridiculous improbability, has been the most interesting to me, so far, of the two Jet Powers books.
The House of HorrorSo, Su Shan was still a prisoner, and still considers herself an enemy of Jet Powers (apparently thinking he might turn her over to US Government authorities because she had worked for the avowed enemy of The USA, Dr. Sinn. While Jet is time travelling, she steals one of his cars, and drives through the desert towards the coastal cities (probably of California). She stops at a roadside diner, and finds that her money has turned to white powder. Isn't that the wrong direction? Isn't it that white powder turns into lots of money when sold to drug addicts? And, of course, we have the old comic book habit of giving the evil villain two tufts of hair sticking upward on opposite sides of his head, to mimic The Devils horns! And the author makes the mistake of having Su Shan tell the readers what they are seeing in the panels drawing, that the villain is making her unconscious by covering her mouth and nose with a chloroform rag. Young children might not know what the asphyxiation drug is, but they know her breathing is being stopped, and she will be unconscious. She is saying "Chloroform! Drugging me!" , as if talking directly to the reader. If one insists on making sure the youngest readers wont miss what is happening, he should have her speak to the villain, saying "Don't knock me out!" The villain has invented a ray that dissolves paper! Humans have known since paper was invented, that fire will consume it very quickly. So, if the villain breaks into building where the object paper (money or valuable books are stored) he could just set the object aflame with a cigarette lighter. So, why would months or years developing such a weapon be worth having done? This seems a bit far-fetched. The villain has a castle-like home, complete with a dungeon for prisoners in an area south of San Bernardino, California??? It looks to be from Medieval times. Yet, the oldest Spanish buildings from the 1700s were made of baked clay (adobe), not stones. This nasty crook must have used some of his extortion gains to import a castle , stone by stone, from Europe, or the countries of the former Crusader States. It even has a portcullis with sharp metal teeth, when lowered quickly could kill people entering below. Su Shan ends up kissing Jet, and needing to think that the man who pushed her out of his space vehicle to a many thousands of feet drop, and certain death, wouldnt have risked his life to save her, like Jet did! Do people really think like that. Do they need to hear in their minds ear what they already know very well??? I think these comic book cliches are so unnatural. They make it really difficult for me to stay in the story. They make every story "camp" and a parody/comedy that cannot be taken even slightly seriously.
Space Ace - The Invisible DeathI had hoped this episode of "Space Ace" would be a LOT better than the one that appeared in Jet Powers 1. At least, the artwork is better than that of The "Space Ace" episode in Jet Power1. Saturns moon, Titan is very far from our Sun. Saturn is gas planet covered in ice. What heat source does Titan have that keeps it ice free? We even see tropical palm trees growing there. I suppose it was figured by the author to be vulcanism hinted at by the actions that produce the boulders being shot into the air from pressure caused by the volcanic gasses being forced upward. The authors explanation that a tiny aircraft passing over the fault line or gas fissure "causes pressure to build up and force boulders to shoot upward instantly (so quickly that they actually hit the tiny air vehicle) is utterly ridiculous. No one in his or her right mind would believe that a tiny vehicle passing overhead could affect what happens deep under the ground below. And even if such a ridiculous, impossible event somehow could happen, by the time the pressure would build up and the gasses underground could react, the aircraft would have long passed the place where the rocks were shooting up (even if it were several miles wide). Even at the age of 5 or six, I would not have believed something so absurd.
The WORST thing about this result of laziness by the author to not research, or, at least do any deep thinking to find a better reason for the rocks to fly up, is that would not have been a problem to use the flying rocks as a danger to the spacecraft. It is just the ridiculous explanation that ruins everything. I would have just had a circular ring of active volcanic mountains surrounding The Ocean of Diamonds, whose constant volcanic activity causes pressure building up to shoot the boulders upward in different areas of those mountains, so one never knows, ahead of time, where along the ring the rocks will be flying. So one has to be lucky that they are not flying just as the crossing over is attempted. There is no approach route that is guaranteed to be safe. We would still have Aces aircraft hit and disabled, without having the logical little readers throw the book down in disgust over the ridiculous explanation, and jump all over it, angry at having their intelligence insulted. This kind of laziness and lack of respect for the readers is what bothers me about so many superhero stories. It is even more insulting than stating that X event happened by saying a magic word. Even at the age of 3 and 4, I didnt enjoy stories about magic. I wanted to know why things happen and how they work, or how they came to be.
Ace and Storm (his female sidekick) find pure water to drink, and Ace kills a condorlike bird using Storms belt like a slingshot flinging a rock. The condor bursts into flames with seemingly now heat source, and is burnt up. Ace surmises the cause was that the land there is radioactive, and sending out infra-red rays. Amateur geologist, Ace notices that there is a lot of lead in the nearby rocks. He builds a brushfire and melts the lead, and covers their cloaks with it. If all this isn't unbelievable enough, the cloaks only cover part of their backsides, Their faces, arms, hands, and Aces legs are all exposed to the deadly infra-red rays that killed ALL the previous visitors to the Diamond Ocean. Our protagonist is a criminal, who decides to sell the idea of erecting infra-red barriers to protect all the space ports from pirate raids, and ask only that he be pardoned for his former crimes. What a man!!! We can be very proud of him. We hope our children who read his stories will pattern their life after his stellar example!
The Metal Monsters
The gamma rays from the fallout of the atomic bombs that were dropped on Hiroshima(o) and Nagasaki, at the end of World War II, caused a metal testing machine to come to life. It (he) travelled north to much less populated Hokkaido, to get away from Humans. After 6 years of a lonely life, the robotlike machine found Mr. Sinn, who had washed ashore after his satellite ball crashed. Mr. Sinn installs a mechanism for the robot to talk, and trains him to help him repair his machines from his crashed "moon ball". Then he builds many more "living robots" by exposing ordinary metals to the rays emanating from the living robots radioactive metal. (about as ridiculous as an explanation from "Space Ace", or the gamma rays from the bomb bringing the first robot to life. Soon, when he has built a decent-sized army, Sinn has them raiding northern island villages to get all he needs. Sinn hears about Jet Powers hiding a time machine, and wants to steal it. His robots build a navy of rocket-powered small boats, and head across The Pacific Ocean towards California. They land and march inland. In his laboratory on a mesa in the desert east of the Sierra Nevada Mountains, Jet watches Sinns Robot army march across Yosemite Park, and reach the eastern side. He sends flying saucers over the robots dropping large ringed magnets to trap them. I wonder how he knew that there was a reasonably large iron content in the Robots metal? As they approach Jets mesa, the robots jam the air waves to prevent Jet from calling for help. Jet sends out X-Rays towards The Robots to change their metal to "Idium". All The Robots stop moving and fall, lifeless (killed by the same atomic rays that gave them life). Only one is left, but he is really Sinn, inside an outward shell of his robots, like a suit of armour. Jet knocks Sinn over and the heavy metal makes him hit the hard floor, knocking him unconscious. He is taken to prison. This story has an interesting basic plot (which now could be worked without the silly false science). The villain could simply make an army of artificially intelligent robots, who would not be as dextrous or as intelligent as those in this story. But, based on the incredibly fast exponential improvement of artificial intelligence over the past few years, projecting out that trend, The Robots could be expected to eventually reach the fringes of becoming sentient and self aware. I would like this story produced without using the non-scientific total fantasy elements, but otherwise, having a fairly similar plot.
Overall book: Issue #2 seems to be a little better than Issue #1 in colouring, artwork, and entertainment level of the stories. I like it much better than the total fantasy with almost no real science of the late 1930s and early 1940s Space fantasy genre books. But, I still think its basic good story ideas could be handled in a more clever way.