Lovely stuff, Bob and I've had a look. Although the script is faint on many pages, especially #8, I could read them on my tablet, so, for me, they look o.k. As for the b&w covers, if that's the only way we can get them, I'm happy. So if some of the others could have a gander and see what they think, that would be great.
Interesting that the strips on the back pages change, well the bottom one does, from a balloon strip to a text strip. Although, there is a balloon sound effect in #4. Normally, with a few notable exceptions, text strips were replaced by balloon strips.