Lucky Comics v2 #5
(1)The Adventures of Lucky
The restraint of the evil Nazis to not kill the obnoxious Lucky is amazing. A clear case of the Literary Protagonist Shield protecting him. ;-)
The gray shading on the art is nice. Seems too granular to be a grey wash, so would this have been done with pencil?
(2)Juke Box Joe
Odd little story.
(3)The Haunted Castle
So Peter's one of those 'smarter than the cops and robbers' type huh?
Unintentional humorous moment. “Wha-what's this! - It looks like foul play.” What? A dead man with a knife in his back is foul play? How are you so sure it's not an accident or natural causes? ;-)
(4)Derry Dreamer
It's kind of hard to care about a story that's just a dream.
(5)Black Wing
Does it seem to anyone else that this story might be... 'inspired' by the Spirit?
(1) "The Adventures of Lucky"I liked the "The Adventures of Lucky" series very much, because as a kid, it's VERY encouraging to read about (and SEE (in the comics)) a kid, near your own age, be so courageous and be as effective as an adult, in fighting against The EVIL German Nazis. It was especially impressive to me, being as I was born a few months after WWII ended, half my extended family was murdered by The Nazis in Auschwitz, and my grandparents were bringing the few survivors (including a twin who had been subjected to torturous experimental surgery by Dr. Mengele, which killed her sister) from Belgium, Hungary, and Czechoslovakia, where their homes had been sold away from them after their deportation, to Canada, to live with us, until they could get jobs, save money and find their own apartments or houses. So, I heard horrific stories of what The Nazis did from the few victims who were mentally able to actually talk about it so soon after being freed.
Of course, in real life, Lucky's pluckiness and refusal to cooperate with The Gestapo, would have gotten him killed, as an example. The Nazi occupation was ruthless, especially in countries whose population was considered "inferior" to The Germans and other "Nordic" peoples in the Nazis' illogical, non-scientific "Racial Theory", in which The Germans' rival French People were considered inferior "Mediterraneans" (despite the latter's northern and northeastern population coming mainly from the same Paleolithic "Anatolian Farmer", and later Sintashta, migrations as The Germans and Scandinavians. But it makes Lucky someone a young male reader can not only respect and try to emulate, but also one with whom he can identify, filling the same type of role as Superboy, Captain Marvel Jr., and all the other Superhero child or teenaged "Sidekicks" played in child-oriented comic books and films.
Regarding the story's gray-tone shading, I agree with you that it looks much more like it was achieved using pencil manipulation, rather than a "gray wash". It looks to me if the artist (Ernie Walker) used a VERY soft pencil, with a blunt (far from its last sharpening) point, using broad strokes on an extreme horizontal-style slant to cover large areas, also using a very light touch.
(2) "Juke Box Joe"The description of "Odd" seems like a gross understatement for THIS one! "Bizarre" might be a more accurate one. Did Canada actually place a BAN on manufacture of vinyl records during The War??? I don't recall reading or hearing about that. Besides, my parents had 78s with Canadian labels, with the copyright years reading 1940-1945. So, I find it difficult to believe that there was such a ban. The idea of an automatic "hear-as-you-pay" record listening service, to get newly-recorded music to the public, as commercial juke boxes and home record players could no longer get that new music on vinyl discs is a really weird idea. That is because dancers and groups of listeners couldn't get satisfaction from such a system, as only one person at a time could listen through the telephone's earpiece.
That is nothing, compared to the extremely strange author's choice of having the lead character's (Juke-Box Joe's) comedic sidekick, Kipper, be a Canadian of African heritage, who is mildly stereotyped as such, and having him agree to take the latter's place on a date he couldn't make, with the woman being a much more exaggerated stereotype of a "Black" person. That was an extremely racist statement, implying that it was an inexcusable offence, for kipper to not realise that NO Canadian adult male (or, at least most of them) would want to date a "Black" woman. That might be difficult for young Canadians of today to believe during these "more enlightened", relaxed times. But, although Canada has always been less racist than USA towards people of African origin, back during WWII, and before, its general "Caucasian" public behaved on a level much closer to The American standard than they do now. So, it might be expected that "Black People" might be the butt of stereotypical racist jokes in reading material back then; but, it still seems strange to me that the author would want to place such a controversial scene as a "Caucasian man" on a date with a "Back woman" in a comic book for young children.
(3) "The Haunted Castle"I liked this whole "Hardy Boys-style", innocent, pablum-style, watered down children's mystery series in Lucky comics (luckily, my cousins had most of the issues). I think that the obvious cliche about foul play having occurred, was surely an attempt to inject a bit of humour into the story. I did have a problem with the way Walker drew that scene. Jabez was too far away from his victim for the knife to sink into "Hump" Harkins' back, and remain imbedded. If, somehow, it even spanned that distance, it would have lost so much velocity due to wind friction, and gravity, it would have merely, and harmlessly, bounced off Hump's (outer) overcoat, and possibly, barely penetrated his jacket, to barely prick his skin (IF even that).
(4) "Derry Dreamer"You have a good point, that a dream-based series is a LOT tougher to sell to the young adventure fans if they are told that it's not really happening. But, this author stated in the introduction narrative, that Derry's wishes that he could partake in adventures of his own, were granted by "The Keeper of Dreams", manifested by "a Strange Force" that actually enables him to live (experience) in his day dreams in the present day (current/simultaneously-occurring) deeds of a hero in The Great War now raging" (ostensibly on Canada's side, opposing Nazi Germany or Japan). Despite the author's attempt to give it some connection to actual heroic events, I think it still is a difficult sell to young adventure story fans.
IF I were the author, I'd have started out my story with several pages showing (highlighting) Derry's history up to that point, that led to his current desperate desire to experience adventure. That would include (A) his worshipping his gadabout, World-travelling, soldier-of-fortune uncle, who has been a big game hunter, wilderness explorer, and freedom-fighting mercenary (Spanish Civil War), (B) his emulating his uncle's heroic play, before his crippling injury, (C) his being turned down by his outdoor playing buddies from joining them on their outdoor "adventures", and being very frustrated. And showing that that frustration consumes his whole life. Still and all, this prelude, although introducing emotions with which readers can identify that make the lead character more "real", can't undo the fact that even IF the reader feels empathy for Derry, AND the reader has been told that, somehow, Derry's "essence" and perception has been transported into the body of a heroic Allied soldier, the reader only gets to see Derry and his thoughts on the first panel or two on Page One, and the last panel or two on the story's last page. So they are really only following the adventures of an able-bodied soldier, who is NOT the story's supposed lead character. For that reason, I believe this story's set-up is only suited for a one-shot, full-book story, with room enough to show Derry's able-bodied youth (to show what he misses), and his being shut out from accompanying his friends on adventures, and his sinking into a Walter Mitty-type dream World, which is a bit of a psychology-based tragedy, worth reading once, but not sustainable as a series (or even a long story broken into episodes (as Lucky Comics structured it).
(5) "Black Wing"Yes, Black Wing looks like a cross between The Spirit (mask and hat), and The Phantom (Hood). And his hat changed from small, and narrow-brimmed, on Page 1, to a wide-brimmed sombrero-type on Panel 8 of the last page.