Buck Ryan - Phantom Prowler
This is the first time I've read a Buck Ryan comic. Interesting that he doesn't even appear until p. 24, but I guess that gives time for the case to develop that he's going to solve.
I loved the British dialogue. Is there a better insult anywhere than 'you nattering, suspecting, ten percent, old lobster-puss'? (p. 17) Also love the idea of a 'nerve nobbler', and I'm waiting my chance to tell someone to 'can the cackle'.
A few plot holes, or at least ambiguities, for me.
When the poison pen letters first arrived threatening Jack's girlfriend Dolly, why wasn't she immediately given protection or put into hiding? Jack is still training and worried about her, but wouldn't he or the manager do something to make sure she was safe? Though I guess the crooks were mainly threatening what would happen to her after the fight if they didn't get the result they wanted.
On p. 28, I thought it was funny to only have one panel with Dolly in it, given that Buck asks her a question and there's no second panel in which she can give her answer. But maybe that's a consequence of it being cut and pasted from newspaper strips. Perhaps that day's strip finished on that panel.
On p. 32, if the 'ghost' emptied his revolver into Buck's bed while Buck was hiding underneath it, wouldn't the bullets have still hit him? Though I guess it depends what the base of the bed is made out of.
The art was mostly good, though I thought there were a few inconsistencies. Buck's face seemed to change a few times (and I don't mean because he had a different expression). There were a few times when I wasn't sure which character it was.
Overall, I did like this comic. I liked the fact that the story could develop over a longer frame and I thought the script was really good. I could imagine this being a half-hour episode of a black-and-white British noir TV show. The actual topic of the story (i.e., match fixing in boxing) wasn't something that particularly appealed to me, but that's more a preference. I can see there are a lot of Buck Ryan comics on this site, so some of the other stories might appeal to me more. I do like a good detective story.
Cheers
QQ