Last week, I took a quick look at the cover and thought: "Tremendous debt to Dick Tracy, I'm guessing." Nothing inside the pages of the comic caused me to reconsider that assessment. I didn't enjoy it as much as I enjoy reading some of the early cases of Dick Tracy, but I'd give it a "passable" grade. (Say, 3 stars out of 5?) I don't think I've ever read any adventures of "Dan Dunne" before, although I'm sure I've run across the name from time to time.
Here are some stray thoughts about the story . . .
One thing that surprised me about Dan's false persona as "The Cozy Kid": Until that nickname was mentioned, I understood he was pretending to be a crook who had just arrived in town, but I didn't realize he was impersonating a specific fugitive from justice; someone the local hoodlums definitely would have heard about.
Later, I felt there was a major flaw in Murphy's "clever plan" to have "The Cozy Kid" (Dan) be the one who risked taking the rap for kidnapping if the police caught him escorting the captive girl away from the fire in the hotel. The flaw was that the girl had seen Murph and some other bad guys up close. If rescued by the cops, she could put the finger on all of them while stating for the record that this "Cozy Kid" fellow had nothing to do with the original abduction.
If the gang had been keeping her blindfolded the whole time -- or wearing ski masks themselves -- then the idea of leaving "Cozy" holding the bag would have made more sense.
(I remember that a similar lapse of logic about "why not just ask the kidnapping victim about it?" spoiled the supposedly-dramatic climax of the original "Ace Ventura, Pet Detective" film for me, way back when.)
By the way: On my first reading, I didn't think the girl in that teaser at the bottom of Page 16 (as numbered in the original comic, not in the scanned file) was "naked." I think I assumed she was wearing a form-fitting leotard or something similar over her torso, such as a circus gymnast might wear. Perhaps I'm just naturally clean-minded where interpreting black-and-white artwork is concerned?
But in going back and finding that picture so I could look at it again in the light of comments in this thread, I was suddenly reminded that on the following page, Detective Dan is suddenly describing the action to us in narrative captions written in the first person. Which is peculiar, because all the narrative captions on any other pages of the same story, both before and after, appear to be told by an "omniscient narrator" speaking about the actions of Dan and the other characters in the third person. Why the jarring discontinuity on that single page?
P.S. I've been holding off on posting in this thread because, while I read the comic-format story several days ago, I wanted to read the text mystery story too before commenting on the entire comic book. Tonight I finally forced myself to read the entire thing in one sitting.
It wasn't all that exciting. I have a strong opinion about who killed the Judge (or at least who hung up the body in a closet; I think only one of the three suspects was likely to have the muscle for that job). But I'm far less clear on who killed Eliza (since it didn't necessarily have to be the same killer each time). I resent the way we're told that Dan has figured it all out (or thinks he has?) with the help of such items as knowing which will is still intact, and what was written on a scorched piece of paper that seems to be all that's left of some other significant document -- but we are supposed to duplicate his reasoning regarding "whodunit" without our being told what those bits of written evidence actually said!